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Run headlong into the wind with me.
We are only ships on this endless blue,
without anchor, north star, or compass spinning.
Find me as I lose myself with you.
<3 Just a short one. <3
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McGuire613 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I love this one. I also love that it is only one little metaphor. Sometimes you use multiple metaphors in one poem, and it can be slightly hard to follow.
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I do love my metaphors. Maybe a little too much. ^^;
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McGuire613 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nah, it's good for poets to love metaphors. just something to be aware of :)
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Roger that! :salute:
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McGuire613 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Bahaha! You are adorable!
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thanks!
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Professional
Just started to look at your work via Mrs-Freestar-Bul. Really like your work. I chose to comment on this one because I love the amount of meaning contained in four lines. Really powerful.
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!!! :D :D :D
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Inklingirl16 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Aw, I like this one a lot =)
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thanks! :D
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
short but sweet :iconluvluvplz:
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :iconjuiceplz:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :iconcuteflowerplz:
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Ultramarine7 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this whole nautical theme!
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Knowing you, I figured you might. :)
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meta-exposure Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I second Mr. Cut's comment. Definitely.
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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musebycandle Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012   Writer
Love how love makes one found and lost at the same time.
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yup! ^_^
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CutToTheSex Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
It's a sweet little poem. I'm glad you're finding happiness again.
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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