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Run headlong into the wind with me.
We are only ships on this endless blue,
without anchor, north star, or compass spinning.
Find me as I lose myself with you.
<3 Just a short one. <3
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McGuire613 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I love this one. I also love that it is only one little metaphor. Sometimes you use multiple metaphors in one poem, and it can be slightly hard to follow.
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I do love my metaphors. Maybe a little too much. ^^;
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McGuire613 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nah, it's good for poets to love metaphors. just something to be aware of :)
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Roger that! :salute:
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McGuire613 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Bahaha! You are adorable!
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thanks!
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Professional
Just started to look at your work via Mrs-Freestar-Bul. Really like your work. I chose to comment on this one because I love the amount of meaning contained in four lines. Really powerful.
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!!! :D :D :D
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Inklingirl16 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Aw, I like this one a lot =)
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thanks! :D
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