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Clair de Lune

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August 8, 2011
The suggester writes: "Clair de Lune by *callerofcrows is a lovely poem that re-imagines the meaning of Debussy's classic piano suite. It left me wishing this was the true story of the piece."
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Sometimes I imagine
That when Debussy penned this movement,
He hesitated with the title.
"Clair de Lune"…moonlight.
Perhaps he didn't have the courage
To add an "E" to the end of her name,
Immortalizing her in music.
The gentle chords pouring
From his piano describing
The peace with which she slept.
"Claire of the Moon."
She was the embodiment of dreams.
Indeed, with her hair spread out
In messy ringlets across the pillow,
The pale, spring-time glow
Of the moon hanging heavy
In the April sky
Gently casting its cool light
Through the half-open window,
Onto her faintly blushing cheek.
She looked ethereal,
Like a flower that opens for moonlight alone.
Imbued in this music is the tenderness
With which he desired
To move a stray curl from where it lay
Draped across her brow.
As the movement sweetly closes,
She gently wakes, smiling,
As I gently wake from the scene I created.
This exists in my imagination only,
The romantic in me dreaming
With the fictional Claire.
What can I say? I'm a hopeless romantic, and am actually disappointed that "Clair de Lune" isn't really "Claire de Lune" and that there wasn't any Claire in Debussy's life. (sigh) Oh well.

***NOTE***

Wow...didn't expect this to get a DD! I'm honored. There's too many of you favoriting this poem for me to go and thank all of you on your wall personally...DA thinks I'm a spammer if I do and won't let me comment! Please know that all of you who have favorited this poem have my most sincere thanks. :)
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