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When you let me go
by the side of the road,
please remember the string
that you tied to my soul.
I'm the balloon you inflated
just to let go;
the night is too cold
and I'm sinking so slowly down.

Why'd you have to cut this
delicate cord,
the thin wire trailing
from my heartbeat to yours?
Remember the science of
the desolate sky,
because the night is too cold
and I'm sinking so slowly down.
My muse is working overtime! I'm feeling okay, honestly, but this popped into my head. It'd make a good song.
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:iconlittlefishpenguin95:
LittleFishPenguin95 Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I.Love.Your.Poetry. haha This is so sad, but it's written so wonderfully I'm smiling. Ahh! :heart:
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:iconcallerofcrows:
callerofcrows Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: Aaaah, thank you so much!!!!! :D
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:iconlittlefishpenguin95:
LittleFishPenguin95 Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. :tighthug:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love it :dalove: Well written. I love how you ended both stanzas with the same line, it made the poem sound deeper. :clap:
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:iconcallerofcrows:
callerofcrows Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :love:
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RadiationAlpha Feb 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Mystic :D
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:iconcallerofcrows:
callerofcrows Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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meta-exposure Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"The string you tied to my soul." I love that.
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:iconcallerofcrows:
callerofcrows Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :love:
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meta-exposure Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"The string you tied to my soul." I love that.
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