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Even when every dream had drowned
and love left me choking on dust
and I felt utterly abandoned by
every aspect of my envisioned life,
something in me set on fire.

Oh, I know heat rises
and I'm lifting off.
God knows where it's taking me,
heaven has yet to shut me out.
Oh, my wings are broken
but at least I'm falling free.
It's the impact,
not my plummeting spirit,
that will throttle the light in me.
Major life changes going on for me. Even as one dream dies, another one springs up. I can't help feeling a terrible sense of loss for the ones I couldn't sustain, though. Maybe it's because I flew too close to the sun, as it were.

I'll win those aspirations back someday.
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:iconladyofgaerdon:
LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Writer
Your piece has been featured in #Lit-Visual-Alliance's Allied Artwork Feature! Please :+fav: the article to bring attention to the feature. :)
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow! Thank you so much!!!
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LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Professional Writer
No problem. :)
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student Writer
The flow and the rhythm is perfect :D
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :D
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome :D
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LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Professional Writer
Ooh the rhythm of this is simply delicious.
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!! :D
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:iconladyofgaerdon:
LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Professional Writer
You're welcome. :)
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The title is AMAZİNG:la:
Your poems always put me in a different state:dalove:
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