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It was in the dimming light
That you captured my gaze.
And while you were intent
On watching the band,
I was content to admire
The way the glow caught
All the perfect hues
In your stare.
You thought I shut my eyes
To absorb myself in the music.
Rather...
I closed them to pretend
your fingers were locked with mine,
And that your lips were inches from mine,
And that above all else,
I was yours
And you were mine.
:iconcallerofcrows:
A request from TheCatOfNimes! The prompt was to write a love poem. I hope I wrote a good one. =)
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~obidoso8 May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful :)
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*callerofcrows May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!
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:iconthecatofnimes:
Never has a poem brought tears to my eyes...EVER :|
but this one did :(
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*callerofcrows Apr 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry? I didn't mean to make you cry!
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:iconthecatofnimes:
naw its just that beautiful <3
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*callerofcrows Apr 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!!!
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