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There's a dreadful pounding in my ears
and it's meant to drown you out
like last night's thunder.
Might extend this, but it sounds good short too!
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CrumpetsHarvey Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012   Writer
It does work short. But I think it sounds like its missing the rest. And if "the rest" doesn't work out you can always go back to just this.
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :) Definitely still working on it.
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LetsSaveTheUniverse Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Student Filmographer
I like it short. :)
But it would also be nice to see the extended version! :la:
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
There's no extended version as of yet! But I'm keeping the lines in my head, let's see where they lead. Sometimes it's like following stepping-stones through a garden, but other times it's like trying to navigate in from the sea.
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LetsSaveTheUniverse Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Student Filmographer
I know the feeling. I have to write something for my creative writing piece for my AS English Language coursework, and it helps just to have an idea float around in your head for a while and let inspiration come to you, rather than sit at a table and work it out. :)
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yup! Chasing inspiration can be so futile! Best to let it come to you. XD
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